Thursday, December 16, 2010

Magpie Tale #45



She holds the child... protecting
Surrounding candles lit... reflecting
Earnest prayers their words... inflecting
Of sins... rejecting

11 comments:

  1. Maybe the for a last line -
    Forgive our sins that you're detecting? LOL :)

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  2. hmmmm....

    now, i'm pondering this one -- gorgeously written, btw....

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  3. To me this is exceptional...well done!

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  4. they are both loving and caring..
    enjoyed this.

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  5. Not what I...
    Was expecting. :-) Well done.

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  6. Great twist at the end. Excellent.

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  7. a great little twisty at the end
    good job

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